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I traveled with them to the ships, making sure I got one more goodbye from my friends. After deliberation, I decided to stay on Earth. My wife was getting on in years and I wanted to spend as many as I could with her, and my children and grandchildren had opted not to leave, and I refused to abandon them. My life, and eventual death, was on this planet now. Besides, I was a hundred and twenty-five now, and my time would end soon after my wife. I bet you never thought Martians would be such suckers for love.

I got a lot of hugs, and it still surprised me Martians could cry. It was an emotion that was rare on the home planet, but it didn't take us long to embrace once we got to Earth. I save the ship going to the most distant planet until last, because six of the Council were on it, all dear friends.

I grinned when I saw Quinn. When we visited our home planet for the last time, their advances in technology and the biology of our species made it possible to extend our lifespans considerably, and they were surprised how few of us took that option. Quinn did, and now he was a rock-hard chunk of muscle, with a thick head of hair that flowed below his shoulders. He and Claudette came together, and decided that they wanted a lifelong commitment. None of us saw that coming. Even stranger, they had taken Milly as a shared spouse. When she was tortured, it took our best doctors and scientists to put her back together, even younger and sexier than before. Combined, their pheromone count was off any measurable chart, and they occasionally 'entertained visitors'.

I found them in a farewell to the lovers they were leaving behind, in a pile of writhing bodies in all sorts of combinations. They were winding down, so I waited. They all hugged me, and the stray pheromones almost overcame me, so I stepped back. Claudette grinned.

"Just once, for old times' sake?"

I gently declined, which disappointed her a little, then she was back to her bubbly self.

I watched, from Earth, as the ships departed, each a blazing fireball headed off in different directions. They would communicate with us until they got too far away, but I would probably be gone by then.

Besides, I was busy trying to save my world to worry about their new ones. Every government had a plan to save the best and brightest of their people, and the few Martians among them had already made their own plans. Just before I knew my time was coming to an end, the world imploded as we suspected it would, and we found ourselves living in underground cities, much like we did when we left Mars, An endless circle of stupidity, regardless of the species. I hoped the next generations would know better. Projections were a return to the surface would be viable in about 120 years.

The last missive I got just before we abandoned the surface twenty years later was from Quinn and his 'wives', surrounded by their brood, seven children so far. Maybe there's hope for us after all.

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ImshakenImshaken6 days ago

Meh. 3 stars

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

One way to express some political opinions that might otherwise raise some rancor {I sympathize with most of the opinions BTW} but S-F isn't really your thing. Not much of a story here.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Westerns, writers, Scots, now Martians!

Q,. You watch too much TV… but it was so on point.

Loved it, and …. On to da next!

OldmantruckerOldmantrucker9 months ago

2nd x again.. still feel the same.. I think sooner are later were All going to * pass* on.. just look around. Doesn't take much to figure out how f-d up this world is getting.. LORD help us all if YOU. Would... .. that's just my opinion... And We All got one !! 🛐🙏🤷🤷👍👍😉😁

AnAncientAnAncient9 months ago

Feel that the story had huge potential, but your exposition was extremely weak.

You had so many ideas, that you could have developed several interleaving story lines.

The 'Mood', and related sexuality, was developed a little, but could have been used to create a lot more drama and tension. Could have spawned several interacting sub-plots.

I think the interbreeding of Humans and Martians is an interesting idea, but I think it could be developed further, and used to add additional tension.

I'd like to suggest that you consider making the story much longer, possibly 10x or more. If you find it rambling, go back and increase the drama & tension. I've had to do that myself -- my natural style is write something similar to a badly written history essay (even when I attempt SciFi)!

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