by Duleigh
Note to Readers - We will finally wrap up the WaWW Saga in Chapter 14, there are side stories in the works also. If there's something you would like to see in the finale please let us know!
Great twist and turns. Don't know how much more I can take. Looking forward to 2 more chapters. *****
I just love this story.
I feel like there is a giant hole as to how the shower at the end happened. It came out of no where. Was there a discussion about it? Who's idea was it? Who was in on said discussion? I think you could write a whole story on just that.
I almost didn't read this story. I'm glad I didn't. A very well written story and I enjoyed it greatly.
Finally a chapter with hope and progress. The last few have been hard to read. The next two better be about a bright future and tie the whole thing up in a bow. Only one question. What did the General do about the fly jockey who killed two and damaged so many? Could be another side chapter?