All Comments on 'Were in the City Ch. 01'

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bucksumgalbucksumgalover 4 years ago
Interesting start

It's an attention-getting start. At first I thought she had picked the house for the wild-friendly location, but by the end of the chapter had a different opinion. Hopefully the rest of the story is just as interesting and it will make a good read.

ironmoose007ironmoose007over 4 years ago
Ok I'll bite.

Ok good start. Let's see where this goes..

freetowrite2020freetowrite2020over 4 years agoAuthor

FYI, I've almost got CH2 done so I hope to keep going at pretty quick intervals. Thanks for the comments!

Love2smile74Love2smile74over 4 years ago
:)

I love were stories and this one looks like it will be good. Please keep writing. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well written first chapter

I look forward to more.

JulielleJulielleover 4 years ago
I feel like this could be good

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countrygirlflacountrygirlflaalmost 2 years ago

27 chapters,,very long read,very good,,,but,NO ENDING,,,last post was over 2 years ago,,

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