All Comments on 'Were in the City Ch. 03'

I am loving the story! Cant wait for more

Can we get some longer chapters? I enjoy the story and your writing very much and wish there was more to read reach time! -LilMeow

Thanks very much for the feedback. I've found it easier to switch point of view by starting a new chapter so my first bunch of chapters are single page but I think longer ones will be possible in a bit. I'm working to get the shorter ones published as quick as I can to keep up the momentum.

I enjoyed this chapter nice and tight with interesting ending lots of options still to come

Although it's a good thing that they were there. And how/why would Darren take his dog for a walk without putting him on a leash? Isn't that illegal? Of course, Darren is stupid enough to shoot at the coyotes attacking his dog - did he really think that the bullets would only hit the coyotes and not his dog? Bullets can go everywhere, ricocheting off hard objects , only stopping when they hit flesh.

Or, were the brothers secretly following Jessie? Can't be a coincidence they were there to save her.