All Comments on 'Were in the City Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Am really enjoying this story

but am curious about Jessie being like a steak? Huh? what? Is Liam her mate? Jessie knows far more about were-coyotes than a normal person would. Is it because her Mom told her "stories" when she was young? Or is Jessie just extra perceptive? Looking forward to more - this has become a favorite story.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A well Written 5-Star Story.

Please continue this excellent were story. When will Jacob and Liam tell Jessie that her mother was a were? How will Jessie react being told her mother was a were? Is this Helen person a member of the brothers pack? What happened to Jessie's Father? Was he a were also? You did not place any information about the father in the story so he is an unknown? Were stories are my favorite type of story. Wardmaster91D70

freetowrite2020freetowrite2020over 4 years agoAuthor

All good questions, thanks, and yes, I have answers. The next chapter will be longer and after that much more will be revealed as we get the backstories of the brothers and Jessie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love the story

I know it is a balance between more submissions and length of each one. But these short bits are just almost enough. Keep up the good work. 5 stars....

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 4 years ago
So Far . . .

This is turning into a great story! I am absolutely fascinated with it! Please keep writing and I’ll keep reading!!

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