All Comments on 'Were in the City Ch. 11'

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SensitiveHands about 4 years ago

Your writing has improved greatly from the first chapter. I am also very intrigued as to what Jessie is. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

freetowrite2020 about 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your encouraging feedback. Next chapter coming soon. Its a pivotal one and I'm not quite ready to submit it yet but should be good to go in a few days.

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I'm curious, generally happy, love to write and finally have time to do it :) My username 'freetowrite2020' was chosen before COVID-19 showed up. Its now more wishful thinking than reality darn it! But I am determined to find time to do it. Writing is a good break from the ne...

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