All Comments on 'Werewolf and God Wars Ch. 06'

Your story is amazing. That said I feel English is not your first language Your choice of words, over all poor grammar and the numerous errors in use of past, present, and future tense all mixed together, pulled me out of the story numerous times. It always begins with the last line of your intro Let us begin ... after chapter one it should be let us resume. Please have someone who is more experienced in the English language do a critical read of your story for GRAMMAR errors.