All Comments on 'Westrons Pt. 06'

What a gruesomely "fun" little chapter. A wonderful job of capturing the horribleness of this little war. Your pacing of the action was really fun to read. Thank you so much for this effort.

Once again I state the obvious - but I really do like your writing style - please continue

Very well-written. Battle scenes are chaos and hard to write. I'm impressed.

Great to see him finally face his first confrontation. Really happy with your release schedule.

I just wanted you to know that you are a wonderful author. I always look forward to any work you put out. Thank you for letting us experience the worlds you create.

I’m thoroughly enjoying this story. The battle scene was extraordinarily well thought out and written and the casualty figures were well within the realm of reality. Please keep up the excellent work.

Don’t worry about too much military. Excellent battle narrative and action packed with the personal side of warfare.

I'm only here for the military Sci fi

The description of the battle was great you don't need much sex for this story just lots more action. Five stars easy for this.

You obviously enjoy the Napoleonic era (i think thats right).

Looking forward to future chapters.

Still trying to work out how digitigrade get on their knees. Can't for the life of see how.

I was liking the story so far, but this is the chapter that made me stop wishing you'd get back to a Vannerbehn's Luck sequel.

Looking forward to more!

enjoy Langoret, adored Tudino and naturally love Themis. She really is his perfect match!

Good battle detail and I found it quite gripping and well-paced. You had him intervene at the right time, although it wasn't perfect, which is where Tudino entered the fray.

Enthralling story! Easy 5.

to read about hilarious Tudino and the quietly-loyal Langoret. Of course Themis...wow. Even lovelier to read about her and about Cook a second time. :)

Getting better and better - having given a well-merited 5***** before I can't improve my score - damn1