All Comments on 'Wet as the Lake Below'

by krystal_mears

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Very nicely done. So glad for the happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Stupid

You wrote a looser story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderful, believable story.

More, more, more--this is great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I really enjoyed the beginning and all the lead-up to the final "reunion" scene, but the sex read like what a porn-sick male would write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
teehee...

Finger Lake.... hahaha

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 5 years ago
pretty good

this is one of the better stories of this contest

vespa69vespa69over 5 years ago
Um, fucking amazing?

Yes indeed. Frenzied piece of hot as fuck writing. The climax was fantastic and teased out beautifully. Thank you!

Only_connectOnly_connectabout 3 years ago

Fabulous! Soooo hot and sexy, in the best possible way.

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