All Comments on 'Wet Miranda's Lesbian Threesome'

This is one totally erotic and yet so very sensual story. I can only hope that this is based on real life encounters! How about another chapter or two??

Great story! My only suggestion would be a more careful proofread; there were two typos that caught my eye.

Loads of inaccuracies in grammer.

Loads of inaccuracies in the text e.g. Sophie's relatinship with Jen before they broke up was a conservative one which didn't use toys. Later you say that Jen and Sophie used to fuck up the ass with a strap on. Please make your mind up Bad grammer and inaccuracies in the story make this hard reading.

Go and practice some more ans see if you can come up with a more believable story.

Yes, there are some inaccuracies. But so what, its smoking hot! I've seen adult movies with inaccuracies too, but that doesn't ruin the experience of being turned on...I just care about the sex and the people, not the mechanics of the plot!

Love this story. Thanks for giving me a wet tummy! :)

/Per

Thank's for giving me a wet tummy! :)

That's some sexy shit

i just wanna say miranda do you wanna have sex your 22 im 24½ were practically ment to be just write back and ill tell you what to do from there