All Comments on 'What a Dad Wants Ch. 06'

I've been following this story the whole way and can't wait for the next chapter!! Your writing is amazing!

Dam that so hot😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 can’t wait for the next chapter

Truly wonderful! I can't wait for more of this series.

I was hoping daddy would have went with her to the doctor so he could see her get a full exam by the female doctor while her feet were in the stirrups then when the doctor left dad fucks her while shes still spread eagle iin the stirrups and the doc walks back in and catches them, Just offering ideas , great series thought!!!!

It is so hot to watch her slowly being transformed into a slut. Incredible story!

Great job of writing. Descriptive and flows well. Looking forward to more chapters and where it may lead to next. Hope there are many more chapters!

How hot this is!!!

Plan B can be a pretty shitty experience. It often causes bloating, cramping, mood swings and period-like bleeding. I know Lit is fantasy land and you are building a great fantasy in this series, but, sadly, Plan B or emergency contraception or the Morning After Pill or whatever you want to call it can be a crappy experience for a woman.

How I wish I was that girl, so hot...made me explode

Yet another homerun! I'm in love with Gabby!

I just wanted to say that I’ve read novels with dominant men and their submissive partners and this guy you created is like my dream ML. If you were willing to take the incest out and write a full length novel, I truly believe you could make money off it. That’s how good I think your writing is. Definitely a girl with a gift. :)

AWESOME!

Exciting

Can’t wait for the next chapter

This story sets itself apart from others in its genre by leaps and bounds. The author crafts a plot line that is not only exceptionally well written but believable. The storytelling, relying on the taboo, the erotic and the relationship, is similar to Alexa Riley and Penelope Douglas. Both authors are talented. This could easily be published, banned but published, similar to K Webster’s Hale and The Wild. Though, again, girlwithagift, posses talent to build a story, not the shock and awe troupe BS that are churned out in the hundreds that somehow get published despite there being a massive lack in storytelling talent.

Color me very pleasantly surprised. Shocked more like. I love a daddy complex but have never ventured into reading something that is the ‘literal’ relationship unfolding. Normally this type of story is so eye rolling and badly written it feels like an absolute waste of your time, but this didn’t. The author possesses true talent.

I’d love to read the whole book she is building into. I’d also love for Andy and Gabrielle to run off into the sunset. As long as the story doesn’t devolve into some gross family orgy, in which case it loses its appeal, and the separating talent it had. As well as its ability to get to a sub-mainstream book market.

Seeing it has been a year since she last posted I sadly think the writer is done and over with this specific foray. I appreciate her caliber of writing. This story was poles away in being well crafted and evolved compared to her quickies. She really brought something tangible to a reader.

I’d swear this is a published romance author. Absolutely would wager my kindle holds her mainstream books given how talented the entire thing is.

Please come back, or get with K Websters banned book publisher to bring it to your readers as a fully flushed romance book.

Also, any star ratings to this 8-part series, if you are not logged into the site and try and rate unanimously, the star rating disappears. This author has guaranteed WAY more views and high ratings that disappeared just like mine did repeatedly, giving her an unfair and massively inaccurate score.

What’s phenomenal about the 8 chapters of this is that Andy and Gabrielle’s relationship revolves around true and deep running love. There’s actual meat to the plot and to those two characters. It’s not a story thats basis is fluids flying everywhere. It’s really really well written! Unlike anything on this site or in this genre available to read anywhere.

More please girlwithagift

Keep writing, keep writing

Holy hell is this series hot!

Tender and loving but unbelievably erotic

Why aren’t you writing more girlwithagift?

Who would have thought this could be so hot!

I agree with another reader that this would be an amazing fully flushed story. I’d love to see how the author builds it up to this point and where she takes it after chapter 8 ends.

These freakin covid books where the author leaves them unfinished after 8 chapters!!

Where are the dates they’re supposed to go on?

Yes, now expand on the relationship they are embarking on.

This author couldn’t get any hotter!!!!

I’d legit purchase this if the author turned it into a long book

Yes, yes! Date night in the city! Please write this!!!

Shit, this is panty melting HOT!!!

Whoever wrote the date night in the city gets my vote to read about

Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Mmmmmm. I need a daddy to get me pregnant.

You are highly imaginative and write stories that can be believable as possible.

You should write on smashwords, too!

This book deserves to be published. There’s a lot of authors who have cringey storylines and I can’t take their stories serious, but you have real talent. The daddy and daughter books with good plots are rare to find. I love their relationship. It’s erotic and romantic. I am rooting for Daniel and Gabby to end up together someway, somehow. And Stella can move out of the country or whatever.