All Comments on 'What a Dad Wants Ch. 08'

Hot dang..this is one hell of great story...Love the character development..and the dialogue is cockthrobbinglyspinetingling...More, more, and still more, please....you get 5 stars from me, girlwithagift

...is all over this story, without you even telling us about it. Daddy and his baby-girl are going to get caught, if they keep at it the way they are! Feeling that, along with their dialogue and actions, is keeping me hard in such a good way. Good work!

Amazing as always!

Love it. Love it. Love it. Clearly they will get caught at some point. The question is, what will the reactions be? Also, I really dont want hear about dad's gay past. If that works for some people, I dont care, it's just more pussy for more me. It just doesnt interest me, and really doesnt seem to fit the storyline. Still, I like it. A lot.

Perfection. So invested in this series. Blown away by your talent girl 💗

Great story, amazing writing!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and favorites!

I imagine they will get caught if they don't use more caution. I can imagine routes for this story to take and I know my personal opinion is that it stays just the two of them...fingers crossed!

I don't know why this would have anything but 5s. I wish there were already 100 chapters. I'm entranced with these characters.

I'm absolutely loving this series! I am enthralled!

Awesome Series can't wait for more

More please. Great chemistry and so much heat

I want one (or both) family member(s) to know what is going on and either join in or casually say something off handedly, also want someone else to join in, especially after this chapter. damn

Hey author:

I just wanna make sure that you know you're insanely talented. Yeah, I know the topic of your story is taboo & raunchy & posted on an erotica site, but, honestly, none of that diminishes the sheer quality of your writing. You're so intuitive & your characters are so fully fledged. But, your sexual prowess is just phenomenonal. You're an awesome writer and don't ever doubt that.

I want more !!! Please make more this is the best.

Each chapter makes the reader yearning for more.

I'm sure readers are imagining what's going to happen next.

I'm hoping Gabby gets really into Anal sex and Double Penetration.

My ultimate fantasy is to be double penetrated by my older brothers...

Please add more

plz continue

Please don't turn it into a family group sex.I am loving the feelings,dilemma the dad is having which makes this story different from the other stories of the same storyline.You are an amazing writer.This is completely taboo but this story is really different.Every single time story like this turns into family group sex or just general group sex but this one is really really good.

please continue

Please continue

Please fucking continue.

Holy cow!!!! This is EXCELLENT. You are an amazing writer. The way you describe the interactions between dad and daughter makes me feel like I can see what is going on. My pulse rises and I hold my breath. That is how good you are. I also agree with a couple of other writers. I don't want to see it turn into a family thing either. I don't enjoy those stories; they don't do anything or interest me-and there are soooo many out there. Hope you keep posting here! I'll read it. Heck I would buy your stories.

Love this series! Love that the male talks dirty during the sex. I have read too many stories that feature the male talking too little or none at all and it is all the female. Your stories are fantastic! Can't wait for more Gabby and her daddy...

When is part 9 coming out!!! I’m dying here😂

More please...more

I can’t wait to read the next one. This is absolutely the best series I have ever read. Thank you.

Ah yes, this is exactly what I'd been missing. Thank you for this, I do hope you return to this story for more.

Need more!!

NO BECAUSE THEY ARE SO CUTE. I lowkey want the mom to find out so the dad and daughter can finally just leave and be together 🙄.

This story is so different from the others in this genre.please don't make it into a family orgy.

More, hurry up and get to the next chapter!

Continue, please.

I hope mom finds out is OK with it

This story sets itself apart from others in its genre by leaps and bounds. The author crafts a plot line that is not only exceptionally well written but believable. The storytelling, relying on the taboo, the erotic and the relationship, is similar to Alexa Riley and Penelope Douglas. Both authors are talented. This could easily be published, banned but published, similar to K Webster’s Hale and The Wild. Though, again, girlwithagift, posses talent to build a story, not the shock and awe troupe BS that are churned out in the hundreds that get published.

Color me very pleasantly surprised. Shocked more like. I love a daddy complex but have never ventured into reading something that is the ‘literal’ relationship unfolding. Normally this type of story is so eye rolling and badly written it feels like an absolute waste of your time, but this didn’t. The author possesses true talent.

I’d love to read the whole book she is building into. I’d also love for Andy and Gabrielle to run off into the sunset. As long as the story doesn’t devolve into some gross family orgy, in which case it loses its appeal, and the separating talent it had. As well as its ability to get to a sub-mainstream book market.

Seeing it has been a year since she last posted I sadly think the writer is done and over with this specific foray. I appreciate her caliber of writing. This story was poles away in being well crafted and evolved compared to her quickies. She really brought something tangible to a reader.

I’d swear this is a published romance author. Absolutely would wager my kindle holds her mainstream books given how talented the entire thing is.

Please come back, or get with K Websters banned book publisher to bring it to your readers as a fully flushed romance book.

What’s phenomenal about the 8 chapters of this is that Andy and Gabrielle’s relationship revolves around true and deep running love. There’s actual meat to the plot and to those two characters. It’s not a story thats basis is fluids flying everywhere. It’s really really well written! Unlike anything on this site or in this genre available to read anywhere.

More please girlwithagift

Wowza!!!

OMG holy crap

To be cont.

okay, where’s the rest?

Hot hot hot, can't wait for the next part

More please

Where’s the rest???

This.Is.Amazingly.Well.Written.

Where’s chapter 9, 10 etc., etc.?

Pleeeeease write more. This story is da bomb. Hope Dad gets rid of Mom.

Too bad this appears to have been written during Covid and that was the only reason it was written. Really would have been interesting how she wrapped up the story and how long it would have lasted.

Definitely like what another reviewer said, this author is exceptionally talented and this book like more than one reviewer said is unlike any other in this genre!

As the authors name says- girl with a gift- is right! Unfortunately she doesn’t appear to be finishing this.

Could this be Alexa Riley writing?

I agree with another reader that this would be an amazing fully flushed story. I’d love to see how the author builds it up to this point and where she takes it after chapter 8 ends.

Who would have thought this would be hot as hell!?!

So fucking HAWT

If the Mom was not a part of the story, maybe passed away and this was an adopted daughter and father this would be publishable. Still so effing hot.

Whyyyyyyyyy has this writer abandoned this series? So bummed by it ending.

Jesus Christ. Expand on the breeding.

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

I totally can see how 70k+ have read this!!!!!!!!

The fact Danny calls Gabby’s pussy the best he’s ever had makes up somewhat the whole lovey dovey relationship with the mom.

This series, though abruptly ended, is everything!

I really wish the author would have finished this more. What she wrote was incredibly good and with some alterations, such as removing the mom aspect, would be excellent

Damn this is hot!!

Damn this author is insanely talented!!!!!

Please write more!! Danny and Gabby are everything!!!

I’ve gotten off to this SO many times. These two characters are insanely hot!!

I have read this story more times than I can count. My pussy throbs from the beginning to the end...usually ending in me squirting all over.

Another chapter or two would be most welcome.

If one could get pregnant from a story this would be it!

Without a doubt the best work of erotica on this entire site!

This is a frigging phenomenal story!!!! The Dad and daughter are so hot. Seriously so so so hot. The only thing I don’t like about the entire thing is the thread of a happy marriage running through it.

No! It says to be continued but the author hasn’t written in 2 years :( Please keep writing!

You are so incredible at writing! The daughter and daddy story is so exceptionally erotic and a huge turn on!

You’ve written a really good story and I hope you continue to finish it!

I wish this was porno video and real!

Hope there is more

So I loved this chapter except for Daniel’s past. I am not into bi or gay stories. The daddy / daughter fantasy is extremely hot and especially how this wonderful, talented writer tells it. I am going to imagine that Gabby’s daddy never slept with a man. I know everyone has a past including her parents but do not add anymore people to this daddy and daughter relationship. I do not want Gabby’s mom partaking in their sexual relationship. I do not know if it is selfish but the only people who matter are Gabby and Daniel. If her daddy lets Gabby have a threesome, let it be with a man and only they share her. I do not want both men being into each other, bleh. I do not purposely mean to full on criticize or offend your beautiful story. It is only that I think adding more people or even letting Stella meddle would be a huge turn off. It would turn out to be more like a family orgy, or even diminish Gabby and Daniel’s hot relationship. Daniel’s focus, passion, and love for Gabby is what stands out. Please do not take that away from them. It’s also HEARTBREAKING that you are nowhere to be found. It’s been two years but I hope you are doing okay and one day decide to come back. You have fans. People who have fallen in love with your extraordinary writing skills.

I’m in agreement with the reviewer below!

What would be perfect if her brother caught them & joined in too

I’ve really enjoyed the Danny & Gabby narrative. As a reader the inclusion of Stella and even the brother turned me off and distracted me. They served no purpose in developing the characters of Danny & Gabby.

I wouldn't begin to know how common it is for a Father & Daughter to develop a sexual relationship, but what i can tell you, is that it is like nothing on this earth. Sex is wonderful anyway, but when its your own daughter, even the most simple of things like pulling down her panties is different than you have ever imagined or experienced before. Its because you have brought up your princess and "Daddy's Girl", & you develop that father daughter trust & love over the years. Then when your daughter is grown up, and you both discover you have the same sexual feelings & passions, and you start to discover them, its just mind blowing.

Alas this is where the story ends even though there are clearly many more adventures for Gabby and Danny to be had. But what can you do when the author suddenly stops writing? Too bad :(

Me n my girl so desperately ready for the next part I'm so sad you haven't worked on this in awhile your very talented also let the story flow how you want

I love the d/d storyline! You are really a great author. From a reader standpoint including Stella in the plot is a massive turnoff and distraction.