All Comments on 'What a Doctor Visit'

I'm trying to think of something positive to write about this story. I just can't. I'm sorry but this wasn't good. Please don't encourage this type of drivel by voting it as a Favorite Story. It only encourages those who have no business writing erotica.

Learn how to write as an adult before trying again. This sounds like a sixth grader try to tell a story to his friends.

Did not like it at all. First comment says it all.

There really needs to be a zero-star option.

Sloppy, immature, too many typos, incorrect use of words. Story line was good, but grammatical mistakes ruin it

I have often fantasised about fucking my black sexy female doctors.

Great story.

An OK storyline with only sixth grade English.

Do you really think that a person who has spent 5 years at University 4 years as an intern is going to risk all that & a career on a dick you don't have? 8 inch dick places you in the top 2% of the human population, highly unlikely. Start again use spellcheck & reread what you have written and get rid of error words.

The English language is a mess in this story, and although the story could be an exciting one, which makes it nearly unreadable. I'm left wondering if this was translated from another language. I encourage cooterboo to employ an editor in the future. I see promise.

This is, without a doubt, one of the very worst things ever to have disgraced the pages of Lit!

Please Lit, introduce a ZERO rating for tripe like this.

Felt like a rushed story. Next time slow down and let us swim in it. But not too bad not too good. It was a meh out of 5

The writer is not learned in story telling, so has used the basics to tell their story. We can certainly pick it to pieces, but hopefully the author will learn as they submit more???? Story telling is an art and not just a jumble of words which this author hopes will be acceptable. Unfortunately it is not.

Unfortunately no flow and no reality. Didn't hang together. Work required.

the dumbest story ever.

Very incompetently written!! Dreadful lack of English!!

This is by far the worst story ever written. I could not get past the grammar or lack of. Please do not write anymore stories.

too many people from india try to write English porn. just horrendous result.