by JungleJane
The storyline is great! However it seems to start off too "fast". If you were to start the story off a little slower, maybe with the two women being more shy and hesitant. Altogether though, it was graphic, but not too graphic. You can tell a woman wrote the story which is what I personally like. Good Job!
Hey Sweetie....Great story...I am at work and read it...hehe....i will have to wait a few before standing if you know what i mean...lol...hugs....Jason
finger in the other's shithole
You guys can't leave it alone can you?