All Comments on 'What Am I Doing Here? Ch. 15'

by ILienBagby

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Key into transmission

I'm sure you meant ignition, but you did it twice. I quit.

OldComputerHandOldComputerHandabout 12 years ago
All good things ...

A somewhat ... muted ending, but I liked it. She just can't stop, can she? And she'll always fall under Harold's thrall, because he knows she can't stop.

I did like her final thoughts, though. Some good future escapades/humiliations for her to endure, although the worst/best would be ... slowly coming out in her "public" persona, the teacher, being a slut in her "real" life, and maybe even getting away with it.

Ah well, anyway, thanks for a delightfully nasty story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Simply ugly story

That's why there's no "favorites". So many things wrong in this sorry tale that I don't know where to start. UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Loved the story, did not like the ending. You mentioned Harold putting a collar and leash on Mrs. Huffman and exploring further her submission to him. I would like to see you expand on that idea.

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