All Comments on 'What Am I Doing Here? Ch. 16'

My best guess is that Harold is not over. He will be back and MaryJane will have him back in her life for more adventures.

I was getting sick and tired of Harold, I'd rather she move places again, but still work at the girl's school. Maybe find herself someone else, and end up with 2 someones.... hmmm twins. Harold can stalk a few, but then have him run with his tail between his legs. >:) No more Harold after that.

I understand why barely 2000 people read it and practically no one liked it. You ran out of gas several chapters ago and this just limped along. Neither clever or interesting it simply was not worth the time spent reading it. No stars.

Great stuff, gets me all hot! Keep up the good work, don't get discouraged.

continue. with the teacher learning to be his slut and accepting him as her master

great story. continue

Make mrs huffman his only in every way. No more sharing

such a great story plz continue