by firebird68
Conceptually, I think this is your best story, although your more recent posts clearly show that you’ve improved in your writing over the last few years. I’d love to see you come back to this one and see how much better it can be.
now she needs to keep doing this till she has trained her to cum from just inserting it in her ass where she begs her to take her virginity
To the person who said too much rape. I dont think you understand what non-consent/reluctance means. If you want mutual sex but hard stuff checkout bdsm or something.
This needs more mutual consent. The rapey stuff is a turn off but the story has potential to be great without it
This needs a follow-up where Jenna and the other girl return the favor and get revenge.
kinda sucks cuz i really wanted jenna to like it by the end so it wouldnt feel so rapey. it kinda made mel seem a bit to dark and to much of a rapist to actually enjoy it. I kinda hate it a small bit. Just my opinion i suppose.
The story started well but then it became really dark really fast...
It really did not need this type of Rape theme =P.
I agree with the previous anon. The story is good but butt raping her was extreme.
Thank you for a lovely orgasm :)
My only issue is that she would have been pouring the sleeping drug into her lungs, not her stomach
So Jenna was clearly open and OK to get a taste at Melissa’s cock, but Melissa had to rape her? Are you that stupid?
This was super good!
Please continue 'Fixing The Sink', 'Fun on the Class Trip', and 'Classroom Cocksucker'! I would love some forced-bondage-anal! Thanks, appreciate you and your work!
let her overpower some macho guy in front of his girlfriend and then fuck said girlfriend in front of him also
Will there be more chapters to this story? I hope so, it was amazing. I hope that Melissa forcefully gets to take Jenna's virginity.