All Comments on 'What are Sisters For?'

Wow, that was an incredible story. and they didnt even have sex! but obviously, u must continue the story, because it would not be complete without these two getting together. very nice storyline going so far. looking forward to chapter 2.

built this up, one tantilizing scene at a time. That was a nice touch with him filming his sister and her boyfriend. Now you MUST continue, since everyone is so "worked up!".

Excellent bulid up by a good writer. But donot TEASE us by not writting The next Chapters. Please continue .Thank you

OMG! that was one of, if not THE most erotic story I've ever read... It didn't NEED the actual act of fulfillment shown - it's perfect the way it is!

Of course, sequels are always appreciated, but props and kudos to you!

what with the teasing,some kind of mental problem.than you got some sick fuck saying ,tease me please.teasing is cruel.

I hope you plan to finish this story. I would hate to think that you went this far, and then did nothing else. Please prove me right

Hole. Lee. Crap. Part 2. NOW. :D

That was an amazing post and incredibly hot. I cant wait to read the second part.

wow wow wow - wow!

You are a great story teller, and obviously a tease. More...

please!

wow wow wow - wow!

You are a great story teller, and obviously a tease. More...

please!

The dialogue between brother and sister was perfect. It's almost a femdom story the way the sister controlled the action. I hope there are more chapters to this story. I hope the other chapters continue along the same lines. You know, you wrote a great story with out the big ending everyone was expecting. I like the denying of the brother because it leads to great aniticipation for the reader. A sister doing that to her brother...great plot.

I really loved this story. You really know how to tease. Add on top of that the blending of the brother/sister fetish and you had a wonderful story. I can't wait to read more!

Regards,

Dorado

What an absolutely torturous journey for Jaime. My thinking was, how could this walking wet-dream of a step-sister NOT know what she was doing to a perfectly healthy male, brother or no? Well it's true, because it happened to my best friend in college. I broke my own rule and actually dated his VERY hot step-sister. He went totally jealous-assed NUTS, when he found out. He wanted to pound my 2 inches taller, 40 pounds heavier, down lineman, ass! After somehow calming him down, he broke down and blubbered his undying love for his little sis! I was dumbfounded completely, and managed to apologize for my shit-heel behavior. Yeah...it does happen. Oh...they've been married some 30 years now...four kids...two grandkids...very happy. Imagine that...Great story...

Very well written! Expertly done -- bringing Jamie to a slow boil. This is hot as hell and I'd love to read more.

One of the best stories I've ever read here. I hope to read more about these two.

Each story is getting better and looking for more exciting stories from you. Really enjoyed the hot ending of this story and look forward to more from you in the near future.

You'll be hard-pressed to come up with a better story; I hope you try.

that was good. I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeealllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy hope that there is more to the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is perfect, i don't think it needs another chapter

great story. i would love to read another chapter. good job. u tease u.

You are the greatest tease in the world. I love when you tease me!!!! Awesome story!

The way you gradually raised the stakes, and then left it haning at the end, perfect, just perfect. Doesnt need another chapter, after all, its all about the tease, right?

Hope to read more of yours soon, you really do a great job.

Wonderful

she was a stupid bitch

that was good nice the way tempo was ranging from high then quicky slow down

what the fuck you build up the story then just as it gets good you stop and leave us hanging it would have been better if had never submitted this story what a lazy teasing piece of shit

The last comment about leaving us hanging...that's the tease, you moron. There was plenty in the story that was fulfilling. You do great work---hopefully you'll come out of retirement and write again.

I wondered about your pen name...now I understand. Excellent job!

that story from beginning to end might be perfect....after reading it i had no problem filling in the blanks in the ending....couldnt have been done better

more more mmore

teasing is never good and the guy was such an idiot no guy the love his sister that much would ever have watched her on camera after she moved in he would have gone out of his way to avoid her try to keep your stories somewhat realistic

super good I liked it a lot but, I was expecting the teasing to have been her plan all along. One of my favorites of all time.

I've read a lot of stories and this story stands up to the very best.

What I like best about this story is how she is teasing him and wrapping him around her finger the whole time. I could think of a great way to continue this story as she continually teases him and eventually makes him a sub/slave and denies him orgasm while using her sexuality to take over the house.The one on one between the two characters is so well written and I like that it contains just the main 2 characters for the most part-it makes it more believable. Great story but I would like it to continue.

i'd love for you to write about a schoolgirl who does this to a teacher or nerd or someone to control men

i lovveee ur descriptions, besssstt!@!!!!

plz write more!!

Please finish this story....it's beautiful

this is great ! just fabulous !! i love it so much !!! please right more of this stuff !!

Very enticing. Made the reader pull himself into your story. I definately hope you write more. Many stories are really dull, become that way, but not the story you wrote.Canadian Tease is going to be a great writer. Very hot.

I mean sure, he was pretty much a wimp the way he behaved but she at best was an insensitive bitch, at worst a real nasty cock tease not worthy of him. Kill her off, that's what I say

More please! :)

MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This has got to be the stupidest story ever, she didn't know what effect her teasing had on her brother, really was she that much of a moron, or you sure she was smart enough to go to college.

Hi Lara

here we are again, I looked up your other stories on Literotica, my word you are a skilled writer, makes me want to reward you in the nicest possible way...

It's a few years since I wrote to you, I live in Australia having moved here in 89. always restless. When I was 14 we moved to Canada from England,and ended up in Edmonton, it was one of the best years of my life, but sadly we returned to the UK in a year.I have a daughter coming up to 30 years old now and grandkids. would be interested in hearing from you on a more personal level if you are interested

ifor_1@yahoo.com

Please, more!

Wow, you are quite the writer, this is one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. Thanks for posting it and letting us enjoy Heather's teasing as much as Jamie.

Couldn't make it through page two. Too fucking slow, boring. Should be 2 pages max....

Fantastic! I edged a lot while reading your story, very arousing. In particular I loved the part of the webcam, I really hope to see another story with this element. Good work. :)

You're my kind of reader, LongEdge - thanks!

I like teasing, but I'd like to see more descriptions about her breasts and nipples. lot so ways to tease with them and then she really should finish him off. Let him suck her nips while she rubs him off, or a BJ.

This is so not my cup of tea.... Maybe it's someone's kink, but fair a bit I was hoping she was pretending she didn't know what she was doing to him ... That would have actually have been really, really hot. This was so painful ... Like insufferably unpleasant for me.

Very, very good. It’s not only Jamie that likes to be teased. PERFECT

Where's part 2?

Another wonderful tease!

WTF, it stops in the middle of a turning point between Jamie and Chris. I hate it when an author does this to their readers. This would have been a 5-star story but stopping in the middle of sex between the two main characters earns a 3-star vote.