by WyndsofChange
Just started reading your stories. I hope they are all as good as this one. Dropped you a note on line.
Ed
The religious zealot Monica Jacobs should have died or killed herself and not taken her craziness to the people in Africa....FREAK
Why the fuck did Roman stay married to the bitch Monica and tolerate all her abuse and restrictions!! He should have divorced her!!
This story condones a fanatic Monica ill-treating and abusing her husband and family
Monica is like those Bible-thumping Missionaries who came to Africa, bluffed the people about man-written Bible and STOLE THEIR LAND!!
Well I suppose a fanatical, somewhat crazy wife beats the cheating bitch type you see in these, and it's a nice change from a tragic death, too. I wonder if there's a story about the Pyles somewhere. Still got a few of yours to read, so maybe. And if not, I hope you write one.
This was a good story with a nice little family ending. Shorter than the others I've read, but sometimes short and sweet is all you need.