All Comments on 'What Charli Wants, Charli Gets!'

I always vote on a story I've read but seldom comment, however, I gotta tell ya, I couldn't wait to give this slop a rating of 1*

"I always vote on a story I've read but seldom comment, however, I gotta tell ya, I couldn't wait to give this slop a rating of 1*"

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Really? Why? You didn't like it? Fine, but just saying it's slop isn't much of a comment.

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Personally, I thought it was hot.

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I'm a little surprised there aren't more comments, especially ones about him knocking her up. (Fifty-four year old men are often still fertile.) I could see people being really into her giving birth to her own aunt or uncle.

I love the stories you write very much please continue with this one. I give it a 5

Oh Hell yes! What an amazing story that I would love to hear more of.....a total 5!