All Comments on 'What Happened Last Night'

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wwwilliewwwillieabout 9 years ago
Fun little story

This was a fun little story. I liked the playfulness. Nice work - keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Again!

"she laid there"

No she didn't. She lay there.

Do try to understand the difference. It's Grade 1 stuff.

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