All Comments on 'What Happens in Vegas'

wow I liked this story - I got into it - I could feel the story from all three people.

I am so damn hard after reading this. Now to go do something about it ..

The constant use of "my wife" was really distracting and pretty much ruined an otherwise pretty good story.

This deserves several more chapters

Had me very hard. Great story

Really good story - the references to "my wife " rather than her name was a bit distracting -- but didnt stop me really enjoying the story

I definitely need another chapter? What else did she "make" them do? Or who else?

One of the better written stories, plot, erotic, grammatically correct, hits all the targets.

Need another chapter!!

Great job! I look forward to more chapters of this one!