All Comments on 'What I Did On My Summer Vacation'

Enjoyed a well developed story line. While the mother daughter sex relationship seemed unreal it is forgiven with the playful sex dialogue. Hope there will be more.

Interesting twist in that none of the characters were lusting after each other. I'm into pee so I really liked the exhibition pissing. The sex was a little Luke warm, but you built up the anticipation nicely.

one of the nicest ones I remember reading. It deserves a followup, but not a dragged out multi parter.. it certainly got my interest. I would follow a part 2, but not likely past that.

I like the Anonymous guy who says he likes the story but then tells the author how he should write the next chapter and even then states he will only read one more.

I liked your tale but at a nude beach only new men get a hard on for a

day or two. you may look at all the nude people but its no big deal.

a lot of nude people you do not want to look at period. a little more mature

thinking would help this tale.

One of the best stories. What a dream summer job. Hope you will do a follow-up. As a romantic I would love to see Marina and Mr OK to be in love.

Sappy, but interesting

Every sentence was interesting. It is not often can I feel so involved with the characters. Near the end, I'd swear that was my cock sliding in and out of Marina.

(but I fell in love with Claire!)

Great story!

What an amazing experience to move around with a hard cock all day long next to two. Beautiful women! Please do a second part!

Loved it! Great Detail, Not Just wham bam thank thank you ma'am!

Calls me back to camps/kibbutzes/retreats/'earthing' during the '60s. First couple of days were always, let's say 'tense' for the boys, then no big deal. Pairing, and more-ing happened, but it was all relaxed. Before AIDS took off, things were a lot less serious. Thanks for the reminders, Ed. 5 stars for your work and my good memories.