All Comments on 'What Michelle Wants Ch. 01'

Reading thru this I’m sure I’ve read it before but I’m so glad you reposted it. The words just rolled off the screen and the dialogue and actions of the characters were consistent and made sense, making the reader care about each one.

If I had one complaint, it’s a very very minor one. The father went from paddling his daughter to rubbing his naked cock on her too quickly.

I would have liked this to play out more slowly. Starting as a joke at first, but getting more steamy for each of them with every ensuing swat.

I truly loved this story, and the way you tied the necklace in at the end was just brilliant!

Loved it. More please.

Enjoyed it. How about a prequel entailing Michelle's and Uncle's dalliances?

Very good story. Thanks.

iT WAS INTERESTING, SEXY & WELL DONE, THANKS!

Top notch story. You have a great writing style that catches & captivates. Well done.