All Comments on 'What Might Have Been'

I liked it and will read more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

combining two sentences into one without benefit of any punctuation. " You were where you were supposed to be the pass was shit." should be two sentences. You have a romantic heart, but an editor would be a great help to you.

An entertaining if slightly limp story. It would have been much improved if Debbie had taken far more time and demanded far more penitence before forgiving the idiot. Imagine how the the LW commentariat would have felt if she and not Kyle had gone off, got drunk and screwed the local lothario!

Pity about the sentence structure but I really liked the passages where the plot was advanced through dialogue rather than description. Jill was a real character.

Fun read, Debbie was rather quick to hop into bed, especially given he was with a skank the night before. But it was a fun, formula story with some humor and a nice speech about his parents.

Good work and a solid 4.

Thanks for writing.

Still the secound time. I read the speach of Kyle to my wife with tears in the eyes.

There is so much true in whose words and equal in another story : are you better with or without your partner, doesn t matter he/she had don!

Has no reflection to the heart of your writng.5

Of Meyer taming Holly and establishing a NY office

Meyer and Holly would make an interesting story.

Screwing up is the human condition. A generous and forgiving heart, along with a sense of wonder that your partner puts up with you, is a substantial part of any successful relationship. We are all in some way difficult to get along with. Thank you for illustrating this in this story.

Amazingly heartfelt.

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Tres Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Fun even if unrealistic! Holly is probably the most interesting character in the story. It would be fun to follow her further adventures. 5 stars

Debbie and Paul fucked up so you can't blame Holly!!

Kyle is just another weak wimpy character

No Pants Holly 😂 shes the ditsy town whore and she lives up to her name, women like Holly serve the noble purpose of being cumdumps. Debbie is just another weak wimpy character, Kyle fucked Holly and had her naked in the hotel and the next day she took him back.

Read - again, still a wonderful, warm, loving, funny story! Thank you.

Holly was the only character that mattered

I quite enjoyed that. While I do agree with some of the criticism from other commentors, I will still give it 5 stars. After all this is partly a high school story, competing with many other stories I have read on literotica, and I am grading on a curve! It wss a very entertaining read, and unlike others I liked Debbie. Maybe it was a little unrealistic, and she could have resisted more, but my own real life relationship came together in a similarly quick, and probably unwise, manner. After 2.5 decades, we are still going strong.