All Comments on 'What Mothers Are For Pt. 02'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
Very fun read

Aunt and cousins will join in as it appears incest is in their DNA.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good read

Hope cousins are all girls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
My 2 cents

This turns out to be a family thing. I like the story so far. Thanks for your time and imagination.

loma38loma38almost 4 years ago

Fantastic!!Filthier the better.The dirty talk is great

Hoping to see another chapter soon!

loma38loma38almost 4 years ago

Fantastic!!!Filthier the better.The dirty talk is great

Hoping to see another chapter soon!

xsiveonexsiveonealmost 4 years ago

I agree with 'Alwaystaboo', it is a very fun and funny read, even with the spelling and grammar mistakes aside, I enjoyed it and the humor. Looking forward to the next chapter.

HragsHragsalmost 4 years ago
More... More... More Chapters please , ASAP

COOL STORY. Hope 2 read more !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I love it

when sixteen year old boys write stories

Tony StrokesTony Strokesalmost 4 years ago

Okay, I'm not normally one for making demands of authors, but we GOTTA get a part/chapter 3 to this. And I sincerely hope the Mom & Sis change their minds about the "no sex" policy. And while I think it's a bit too soon to bring in the Aunt/cousins, I'm not entirely opposed to it. Good first start.

gorden55gorden55almost 4 years ago

I am really loving this story. The writing is very good. Please do more & more of it and I will read all of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

my 2 cents

More please. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

scholarguyscholarguyover 2 years ago

A bit a rushed to the point of being predictable!

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 2 years ago

Yes, Yes, YYYEEESSSSSS!!!! This is a story worth reading...moves just quickly enough, and adds more people at the right moment(s)...Danny is gonna be a busy young man...

Now...Chapter 3...YYYAAAYYY!!!

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

Too much sucking. 2*

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien420almost 2 years ago

It keeps getting better

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5 Stars, great job, looking forward to Part 3.

jcus0511jcus0511over 1 year ago

So absolutely ridiculous, fun filled yarn there can only be one score 5 STARS.

analustanalust7 months ago

Great story, well written and edited. Hoping for some anal soon.

Odess83Odess833 months ago

Слишком быстро всё происходит) Хотя я был бы рад, если бы брат отказал сестре в участии. Он же так заявлял, что терпеть не не может, а тут...

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