All Comments on 'What Mothers Are For Pt. 04'

Hope to read next chapter soon.

This is a fun story to read. It's playful and fun, without the whole, how wrong this is ideal mindset. Which granted,are for good reads as well,but sometimes, you just want a good playful fun read. I hope you continue this storyline before getting distracted with other projects. You can tell that you have a few more chapters in this story. If I was to make a complaint,it would only be about the chapters being short. Don't get me wrong,love the story, just wish there was more to keep reading cuz I don't want it to end so quickly. Which in a way is a compliment to you,cuz I want more that I hate to see the end of the chapter.its a light fun read,plz continue this storyline ASAP 😁

This story is getting better & better with each part so please speed the next chapter up. I do not usally give ideas but I really would like to see him fuck mom & sis. thank you.

I like where this is going. It's outrageous and humorous.

Really disappointing that it was the school principal Dan lost his virginity to, but then again, his Mom is the one who forbid her or his sister Barb having sex with each other. Maybe if his Mom finds out about this, it might cause her to regret her ultimatum and change her mind. I will say this, I think you should work on character dialogue a little bit, as it doesn't seem organic.

I hope Barb and Linda get a chance to swallow some of that hot cum, too...

A great, fun, silly story that is also really HOT. Please continue.

I wonder how they will get around the no fucking rule? I could see Linda getting fucked next... While his sister helps...

Awesome story. I can't wait to see what kind of shenanigans they will get into!

Started off so well now it is just ridiculous

I hate it when you authors treat 18 yr old boys like they are 13, when in fact they are just starting to become men. Using words like, I ran back to my room, women screaming when they cum is not reality. I never was like that when I was 18 yrs old as I was fairly mature for my age. Sex is sex whether it's with high school girls or mature women and have experienced both and had fun doing it. Get your heads out of your asses and at least be as real as possible. There is nothing wrong in saying I walked back to my room or the woman I was fucking was moaning and thrashing about when having an orgasm or climaxing during sex.

More please, such a hot sexy story and so much more to explore yet especially mom and sis getting knocked up not to mention the principal.

Enjoyable series. Please add some chapters as it seems incomplete.

More please

I love how people have so much criticism about a story and point out everything they didn't like. Well to all the Anonymous arm chair Authors; let's see your writings and show us all your creativity. I myself would love to see it.

I loved it, I don't understand people who pick this stuff apart. Please write a lot more stories about Dan and Barbie and Linda. Or anything else. I'll read them all.

Great story. I really, really enjoyed the 4 chapters. I hope the negative comments aren't what stopped you from writing another chapter. The story was very entertaining, and the sex was very hot. I am disappointed to see things end here. Please continue

I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks

This is the first comments I have made since starting the series; I am really having a good time reading it, goofy mistakes and all!! I agree, the content gets more "out-there", but it is a fun read.

I have been known to make what many would call "ugly" comments about writers; when I do, I want them to be constructive, not hateful/hurtful...not gonna do that here, apparently there are enough of those to go around!

Suffice it to say, I LOVE THIS, AND CANNOT WAIT TO READ CHAPTER 5!

FIVE**5**STARS...YYEESSSS!!!!

You're a great writer. He fucks the principle for the first time in his life. I hope he gets to fuck his mom and sister. 5 stars.

Love this story. Looking for more soon. May anal be in the future?

Down the rabbit hole we go. Time to fuck all the pussy you can now! :)

Я понимаю, что моя просьба смехотворна!! Добавь хоть каплю логики!!)

Need to continue this series. What about the party? And more fun with the principal, counselor, cheerleaders, and others at school