All Comments on 'What Mothers Are For Pt. 05'

Fantastic series!!!! Keep up the hard work.. I just love your work!. I'm sure you are sick of hearing it but some breeding could work well here too. Thank you and KEEP ON TRUCKING

Too unrealistic…a juvenile fantasy

I know that this story is unrealistic but I don't mind because fiction doesn't have to be realistic but I think that a story, if not realistic, at least it has to be coherent in order to be a better story. For example, in this case, the author of this story should correct two things at least: In the first chapter he is 19 years old and her sister is a year younger than him but in this chapter he is 18 year old and his sister is his twin. I think the correction is easy and the story would benefit from it.

That said, I like the story because the things told are my cup of tea: a male forming a harem of curvy busty females without other males' involvement, turning the females into his private sluts. In real life all that is very wrong but for that is fiction: to "live" one's kinks vicariously through fictional characters.

Your writing is a parody of the incest genre, I find it amusing but not very sexual or sensual. Your stories make me laugh so I will continue to read your submissions. I hope you are writing this stuff with tongue in cheek and not as a serious article cause nothing about this story could be true even in some kind of parallel universe.

The haters here can't even write a two paragraph review without boring me. They whine about their little flaccid issues. Ignore them. Write on!

This is just summertime saga the book, good work.

People, this is "EROTICA" NOTHING MORE nothing less. I find the writer very talented with a wicked dirty horny depraved mind and that is how you get good sex. the detractors are such bores, their own hand falls asleep when they masturbate. Its not impossible being a popular guy with a big cock. I know. I love looking at a womans eye's when I'm entering their tight twats their eye's get real big and they say how good it feels, nobodys ever gotten so deep etc.

It reads like one of those Big Fat Cock stories. I love how ridiculous it is. Who will he fuck next? :)