by mintabal3239
No disrespect intended but you have no command of the English language and it adds utter ruin to a story which is not that well done in the first place.
While I loved your story, I would have welcomed much more of the husband's developing reaction to his wife's obvious experience. Don't worry about sentence structure too much, it certainly could be improved, but the story shines trough.
both in terms of content,
as also autheticity of
context and language!
perhaps if I smoked whatever they use over there then maybe this would have made some sense
Inept and illiterate ! One of the worst!
surprise, you married a low life fucking slut and you married her because no one else bothered to ask - BECAUSE THEY NEW SHE WAS A WHORE.
She had two lovers before she was married, and none since.
Like she said, it's okay for guys to spread their seed, but not for women to spread their legs.
Sometimes I think most of you are 14 years old.