by psyche_b_mused
I just wish he stopped feeling the need to leave bruises every time he's with her. I mean, damn, I know he didn't have a lot of love growing up but throwing her against the counter because she hugged him? I wonder how he'd deal if she became pregnant--could he keep a lid on the brutality?
Thanks for the new chapter. More please :)
Ok now I am hooked and cant hardly wait for the next chapter. Loving it.
I agree with Katlady on the consistent aggression thing but I understand where you are coming from in developing his character... I love how much he struggling with the change and how subtle a lot of the affectionate changes are. They are a long way from a conventional happily ever after but their progress there has been well written and I look forward to watching the two of them evolve.
Can't wait for the next story :)
as usual....
Katlady and LostChicken...... to me Victor's violence towards Kelly is his defense to keep her at arms length.... He doesn't like the idea that she is becoming more than just a frail to him! He is in charge and everything is done on his terms.... the nature of his beast.... I can't wait to see where psyche_b_mused takes us next...
to excuse his aggression you guys are uncomfortable with she obviously likes a bit of the pain thing... and it's his nature. Really well written and quite different!
i am reading this story again for the second time. it is just as good this time around. i hope you will do another story in this same relm. thanks for the great work.