by psyche_b_mused
Great chapter. It's getting really interesting now. Waiting for the next nail biting chapter.
The two of them finally admitting they don't like to be separated from one anther and she saying Yours without being commanded..... Marvelous writing!
I love how you never disapoint ur readers by posting really promptly!!! oh n ur story is great. i think ives said tht enough times...but it gets better and better. Im guilty of skim reading a lot of stories on this site, but urs is one i always read again and again!!!
Lady they don't have enough Stars. Another great chapter it was a joy to read........and now it is back to waiting for more.....waiting, waiting, waiting....lol
FINALLY! Victor admits to having feelings for Kelly--in his own way, of course. This has to be one of my favorite chapters--so far. The emotional scene on the couch and the playful morning after were the best.
Great chapter.
Wow - you have written an incredible chapter here. There is some long awaited and beautifully composed moments, especially when they are in front of the TV. I was almost crying there. It was perfect, suited their situation, characters and love perfectly. You deserve 20 stars just for that.
As for my comments on previous chapters - okay, I will admit it. I got it wrong with Conlon. He is actually a nice guy once he warms up a bit. No more bad guy theories from me on that front.
Please tell me you are going to be writing more of this story! I have fallen in love with it!
i can only repeat over and over what has been said before how amazing u are for writing this story so good and how much the story is captivating as well as the characters in it.
i cant wait for the next update!