All Comments on 'What the Heart Wants Ch. 00-01'

Yet another 'writer' on this site who thinks CHEATING is romantic. 1*

The story is alright but not fantastic: the plot seems to support cheating. There are several glaring spelling mistakes and some irritating typos. Sound proof reading would help future episodes.

Ok, first, "It's a fictional story", this entire (no cost) site is based on someones unpaid, free time, creative writing. There are dozens of themes that support far "worse" than cheating, read them or don't. Yes I know these situations happen in the real world, but "this situation" isn't real and as far as grammer errors we all type or write slower than we think, mistakes happen, this isn't English 101 no grade will be given at the end, move along. Constructive criticism allowed, judgement not. Whew...............

QueenOfTheNile, I enjoyed your story and look forward to future chapters..........keep'em coming😊

Great writing! I completely agree with the last comment, ignore the haters.