All Comments on 'What the Singer Saw'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot hot hot

Damn hot n sexy story make it at least 5chapter

eespld1994eespld1994over 8 years ago
Could be so much more

There was such a great start to this story and it was well written. It was too short. It could be so much more, to explore who is Cassidy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nertz to the Demands for a Novel

This was like a segment of a TV series. There were two crime cases. They were both wrapped up in this story. This is a short story, not a novel. The characters hooked me. Yes, I'd like to see them used again in other stories, even ones related to this one. SR does that, though. Everything doesn't have to be an exhaustive novel. I'd like to see this setting and these characters again (in fact, this setting occurs in other SR stories -- as well as characters much like these), but I don't want something like this to have to be a chapter of something bigger and rambling about.

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 8 years ago
Got my attention

Really enjoyed this. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Can I Be Next!

Up to your usual standards of greatness. Nice story, great detail and characters. I want to be Dean Dorsey. I want to be next!!!

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...