All Comments on 'What We Did in Lockdown'

by HankWilliams1956

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fisheronefisheroneover 3 years ago
Good read

wish it had another page or two to get married and babies delivered

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Your writing is at about the 10th grade level. You need an editor. That being said, the story is hot!

sabra16023sabra16023over 3 years ago
Keep Going

Your just getting started. You need another chapter or more in the story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice Romance story

It's not even close to an Incest story. 4 stars for miss labeling this as an Incest story.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Very Nice

I'm a sucker for a romantic tale.

YourMommysDaddyYourMommysDaddyover 3 years ago
What do you say!

Hey Vic,

You knocked another one out of the park.

I followed you here from xHamster. Thanks again for the invite.

Speaking of witch, did you ever check out THUNDER by Itheswag (it's second from the top listing on xH) It's a great series.

Right up there with yours.

Keep up the good work.

Stay Safe, and Healthy!

Walt

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not 10th Grade!

Someone said your writing is 10th grade level - they were being kind. I'd say it's more 8th grade.

And using the great Hank's name for this garbage...? I hope his family sues you into oblivion!

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I really don't know what to say. I am a family man raising two grand-kids with my wife. The wife and I met at a swingers pool party and have been together ever since. We dated for one year and married one year after meeting each other. She is the love of my life. I enjoy going...