All Comments on 'What We Did That Night'

by TromeoQue

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Nitehawk2BearNitehawk2Bearover 13 years ago

Nicely written with good progression. His sister does have a nasty streak in her for wanting the neighbors to watch. Can't wait for your next submission addressing that. Definately a hot story.

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Chapter 2 ?

You can't stop now. You've created a couple of hot siblings that deserve to go on in the pages of Literotica. I think you have a great beginning to a series, that I personally would read. I think alot of other would read it also. So get writing!!!!!!!!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
A good fast moving erotic story

I think this needs another chapter or two. I hope the next time he fucks her that he doesn't pull out and fills her pussy with his cum.

Who knows; if she gets pregnant they might have paternal twins also.

A great story theme, and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks

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