All Comments on 'What We Must Ch. 05'

Please go back to the other story. I'm dying to know what happened with Stephanie. The new gay couple. Lyssa, Emmitt, Ron grabbing them and the baby shifting. I'm sorry. I know this is a new strand, and I'm trying to follow it, but I am feigning for the next chapter in the Animal Lovers series.

At first I found her strength really appealing but now it's continuing to just put a downer on every chapter... I enjoy her struggle but at this point it would've been easier for the grandmother to trade her to another pack and then she could either escape there or she could find herself missing Devon. Idk the whole mating ceremony is usually sexier or more appealing I wish you would've waited until she fell In Love with Devon or just not go through with the ceremony. I love this story I just find myself shimming through the past couple chapters because her attitude although in real life would be totally justified... In a fantasy it's not very uplifting especially after her constantlyyyyyyyyy being a boring bed partner it makes the sexy scenes really uncomfortable to read and those are my favorite parts! Lol but this isn't my story and you are absolutely an amazing writing please please don't stop and I hope you find my opinion somewhat helpful or at least not offensive... But I do really hope some how her attitude changes I get this heavy feeling in my chest the past few chapters :/

i find her fight refreshing. Sure, it's literotica and non human so you would think it's should be sexy and a fantasy but I enjoy the realistic aspects of their relationships. I think a major part of her still resisting is the fact that nobody else really sympathesizes with her situation. They feel sorry for Duncan which is complete bullshit. Maybe if they can actually understand her feelings ( more than superficially) she would be more willing to open up.

I found her fight with everything in the beginning to be uplifting and powerful but now she is just being a drag on Devon, he has been nothing but nice to her and she treats him like shit. I like the angle of her being pregnant but I want to see her open up to Devon and love him and their baby hopefully.

I'm really enjoying this story because it's different from your other series. I find Anne's strength and stubbornness refreshing. I'm enjoying her trying to plot an escape plan. I have no sympathy for Devon at this moment but I'm sure he will prove himself to Anne and tell her how much she means to him.

She's still fighting and I have a feeling it's not over yet. What made her agree to the mating and ritual.

I love her fight. Why should she just give in because they have been "nice" to her? They haven't been. She has been kidnapped and has made it clear that her doesn't have her consent. He rapes her over and over. Yes, he doesn't understand the cultural differences, but she does see them and know that she won't be able to get away. He has shown her what happens if she fights back even with words, so compliance is the best way not to get hurt. When one person does not have the freedom of consent, it's always rape. I am proud she keeps fighting back.

So far, I think this is your very best of all of your stories. Keep it up, and know that there are readers waiting avidly for the next segment.

I admire Anne's strength but I don't really understand why she went through the mating ceremony. Unless she may be about to teach him to redefine the female's status in a mating.

and well done.

Anne....complicated much? I see Anne, she is a selfish, arrogant bitch who is used to getting what she wants, when she wants it. Now she is just cutting her nose off to spite her face. She is extremely attracted to Devon, buy doing her best to remain a bitch. I think if she does not change soon, she will die. It is no wonder she has not job, family or friends for that matter

Is anyone surprised that Anne is being a "bitch"? This is a woman who was kidnapped to be used and raped (rape is rape regardless of whether you are attracted to your rapist!) We find out that this happened to her in the past as well, so there trauma on top of it . I think this story could actually develop into something good, BECAUSE it doesn't mask the complexity of the situation.

Voted 5 stars! Ur writing is awesome! But mut say this story line pisses me off. Lol. There could never b true love there cuz he is screwing someone else every other night. I love the wolf stories cuz wolves have that maye for life thing. This dude..... Never!!!! Lol. U r an awesome writer tho!!! Pls do more of Lyssa n Emmit. U go Girl!! Lol