by sexgundam666
This is the weirdest shit I have EVER read. It did not turn me on in the slightest, it was so totally over the top madness. You HAD to had been on drugs when you wrote this...mind you Lewis Carroll was stoned of his tits on Cocaine, Mushrooms and various other mind altering substances. So YOU either were trying for the FREAK OF THE YEAR AWARD or you were TRIPPING OFF YOUR TITS.
Just for the record I would NOT want live anywhere near you - Your FREAK might be a communicable condition.
Sorry didn't like your story and it did nothing for me, at all. ZERO out of TEN. EPIC FAIL
Well, someone clearly hasn't ventured that deep into the depths of the internet, this's positively vanilla compared to a lot of the stuff I've seen lurking in the abyss...
Good stuff Gundam!