All Comments on 'What's in a Name? Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good going!

I am enjoying this as much as everyone else.

I hope that Mason, or whoever he is, gets taken down soon, I find it uncomfortable reading about his depravities. Although that might forestall the story, I guess.

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickialmost 13 years ago
maybe

maybe shes a witch, I just love a witch and vamp pairing.

catman71catman71almost 13 years ago
interesting

as to what she is, i await the author to tell use, speculating is fun, but can cause a writer to change to suit the readers, something that should not happen, otherwise i hope to see more soon

mikothebabymikothebabyalmost 13 years ago
Catman

I so agree with you. I am so tired lately of people in this category telling the authors what to write, how to write and what the characters should look like, do and act. LOL - they should just get off their high horse and write them self. I am enjoying this story and will wait for the author to take us where they will. good going so far

VjaxVjaxalmost 13 years ago
Very nice

An intriguing tale, I look forward to more.

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 13 years ago
Really like it.

Alexander is very likable and I like that Ravenna has spirit. I'm excited to find out her story. They are very cute together and I look forward to watching their relationship develop.

canndcanndover 12 years ago

I realized I had missed some of the chapters when I saw 6 out now. As I catch up, I am pulled further in and like the spirit Ravenna has hidden under the abused/battered exterior. I also like the personalities of Alexander v. Dominic. I only wonder about why his first question wouldn't have been whether she knew the vampire who they knew owned that building. Why wouldn't they have tried to figure out why she was there?

Looking forward to more. I loved the scene between her and Dominic...keep things like that coming as they bring the characters and story to life.

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