All Comments on 'What's That Ch. 05'

by justme1289

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arrowglassarrowglassabout 9 years ago
Delightfully different...HOT!!!!!!

Enjoying this series...keep it up!!!!!

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosabout 9 years ago
Get an editor!!

You make certain errors over and over again, on almost every page of every chapter.

For example:

ADDING 'S TO A WORD DOES NOT MAKE IT PLURAL!!

The plural of Basa is Basas, NOT Basa's.

The plural of Sandor is Sandors, NOT Sandor's.

The plural of God is Gods, NOT God's

The plural of Cervix is Cervixes, NOT Cervix's.

...and so on. There's lots more.

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