All Comments on 'What's Wrong with Billy?'

I couldn't tell if she was pushing him away or she wanted him. It read like a rape scene only she wasn't yelling and then she was into it? There wasn't much of a lead-in either. He just showed up at her door and went at it. It was honestly creepy.

I am a big fan of your work, but this one seemed like you put in no effort.

Very nice story. Rated 5* 👍

Disagree with the previous comment. It's an easy line to cross when writing on this topic. But Billy doesn't rape her. She responds just enough to let him know he can go ahead though she will pretend to resist.

Very realistic, good build up and great dialogue. 5* and I hope you continue wit it

A bit rushed but you were firing on all cylinders. Thanks.

Great story construction and build up between mother and son. The sex scene 10/10. In fact if I could give more stars I would. Look forward to more

The emotional as well as the physical connection are portrayed so well. It makes what would be a ridiculous scenario in real life come across as real and logical and natural on the page.

Good pace and nice detail! 5* 😁

The author only handed light diss to father , this time out . You never can tell..The carnal action was on point as per ever with jack30341. Sometimes I wish for more of story from him but what is done here is done quite well with assurance and panache to spare.

Still the very best writer!

I struggle with incest stories, moms and sons. I enjoy reading them even while I can't find a shred of credibility in them. Except this one. This one story makes me look at mothers and sons differently, a hint of possibility. I can maybe understand Annette....