All Comments on 'Wheels In Motion Ch. 04'

another great one. can't wait for the next one

#JusticeForVivian!!!

Nooo! We've waited for so long! We need more intimacy between these two. Just when they kiss again its over:(

I cannot believe just how invested I am in this story. I think I've once in the past refreshed the site semi-regularly for a sequel, but now I find myself casually checking on days where I know for a fact there's not going to be one because there's a date in your bio and it's not today. Incredible work.

So unfair I can't give this 6 stars!

was marvelous. I'm so happy right now Thanks Spokes 😊

Wow... just when I was to go to bed I saw this. Initially I was abit sad as I still saw that Addison is still doing it with Viv. Call me old fashion but I really dont like the idea of it... its like a well its not important now. I know it was needed in the story to make it much more interesting. Good thing that it did end... am a sucker for being LOYAL and a believer that you cant easily move on from a person you fell inlove with. Anyhow the Liz and Addie moment was darn too short... waited practically 4wks for this... you really do know how to keep the suspense up. Now I/we have to wait another 2wks for another chapter of this story... man the sucks. At least by the next one I may be able to see more of Liz and Addie... and of course Jo and blue.

Keep it up Spokes...

CS

Amazing like always

Cant wait till chapter nr 5

Realy looking forward to it

And again thanx for givving us these beautiful storry s

I love this story, just like all the others. If it’s good, it’s worth the wait, right? We are hungry for what happens next! Be kind to us dear readers... ;)

This story just keeps getting better and better with each chapter. Ive been checking everyday hoping I’d see a new chapter posted. Today was a great day. Thanks and can’t wait for more. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I’ve read this twice this morning already. It’s so good. Looking forward to the next part already!

I dunno what else to say.. I woke up in the middle of the night to check if the story had been published. It was worth it!

Ok I can relax a bit. You got them back this far. I look forward to seeing where this goes. It was good to see Jo and Blue and Kat and even Megs got involved. All in all it was a very satisfying chapter. I hope this conveys how I feel about your writing. Thank you, or is it your welcome?

five out of five another good one cant wait for the next one all the best a fan shayne

I don't know what to say except that this is just a really good romance story. It isn't even really smut that this point. Just a well written love story with occasional explicit depictions of sex

There are decent number of authors on this site who exhibit a wealth of talent (writing technique, creativity, etc.) in their stories. In my opinion, there are far fewer authors who are able to take a reader's breath away...Three things give me goosebumps: music, writing, and well-executed speeches.

When I was tasked with writing assignments as a college student, I would often listen to music because the music (usually movie instrumentals) would serve to guide me. I majored in both Government and U.S. History during my undergrad years, so I'd listen to the themes of The American President, Nixon, JFK, The Patriot, Glory, Schindler's List, A Few Good Men, etc.. My brain makes connections between music and writing and vice-versa. I think we may be similar in that regard. As for speeches, Obama can deliver a speech and elicit the same reaction from me...goosebumps. ANYWAY, the point that I am trying to make is that you are one of the few authors whose writing gives me goosebumps because it is just that good...It has that "je ne sais quoi" factor that lets it rise above the rest (for me, at least). I want this comment to serve as what I think every time I read what you post...Your work takes my breath away.

so tense.. so many friends .... but what a way to leave us hanging!!!!

OMG ! Lol .. you didn’t just do that to me again ! I hope you are working on the next chapter .. I’m dying over here ! I love the way you wove Kat and Meghan into this chapter .. that was another one of my favorite stories ! It’s a good thing I don’t have your number or I would be calling you now to get more info. ! You are so amazing ... I can’t wait for the next chapter ... 😍😍

Another great chapter! Love it! Five stars!

I spent every single day in May Until now logging in Twice a day JUST to see if there was a new chapter of work. I lucked out with Kat and Megs. I saw your profile update for the submission of this chapter, and anxiously awaited the update.

I cannot remember the last time I waited for a release or update with as much excitement and anxiety about what happens next...

Again, I’m left speechless and find myself even more anxious awaiting the next piece!

Incredibly well done!

Great writing but honestly, Addie is an annoying character. For someone who says she's in love, she sure gave up so easily. Maybe she doesn't deserve Liz after all.

Please do not keep me in suspense for too long. I have no idea how you can create such characters and story but thanks, I'm glad that you do.

Liz is such a badass. Thanks for coming to my TED talk.

..theres still nothing like a writeup of a good fight. Any of the fights here were articulate and potent; three or more in one read was irresistible! Leaves you hanging; well done

Always love all your stories.

Eagerly waiting for the next part. I know it takes a while to write but I love your happy ending stories so so much.

Keep writing!

Well done.

YES YES YES YES YES! So good! I was not expecting such an action packed and emotional chapter, but this delivered in spades. Keep up the great work. I can’t wait to read more.

No other words for it.....congratulations champ....:-)

Wow . Another great chapter in their love story. Well worth the wait. But please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter .

Frankly, I think that was just mean!!

Corinne ♥

PS It was brilliant too! When is next part......?

I just kept clicking the 5 until I got tired, so I think I rated this installment somewhere between 7,400 and 8000 stars.

I know, that's a pretty large margin of uncertainty. Next time I'll count more carefully. Please ensure that next time happens soon.

Oh my god with the cliff hanger! Noooo! I want the next chapter now. Seriously though absolutely brilliant writing!

...it must have been posted in the middle of our night. So what can I say that hasn't already been said by others? It started superb and it's continuing that way. I enjoy your cliff-hangers but please try not to keep us waiting too long for the next part. Oh, and now that you're with us, don't go away like some other good writers have done. Stay! Here are five stars to be going on with.

i got so excitd when i saw ths chaptr. it hurts me wth evry adiviv moments, its hawt but ouch! wel thank u for endng their thng. hows it gona b now?... exctd for the nxt chptr. oh my gosh wl u surprse us n give it earlier? hahahah.

Another chapter of an amazing story and another cliffhanger.

Love it!, Thanks BrokenSpokes!

What a place to end this instalment... but thank you for writing it. Captivating story telling.

I have read all four chapters and really brilliantly written and showing how life can treat these two people who are in love with each other and have now at the end of chapter 4 where I hope chapter 5 they finally realise they do love each other and they become a couple and lovers because they deserve each other please write more on Liz and Addie and do not keep us on tender hooks please Broken spokes. xxx

You really are amazing, you have a real talent for making characters come to life. Fully realised, well rounded characters. My only complaint is the wait between chapters. I'd love to see this in a novel form cause I would buy it. Lesbian romance novels are not as common as they should be.

Have always been a ghost reader, but your writing. Dear lord, I swear I refresh your page every single night religiously to check for updates before I head to bed. They leave readers (me) in such a happy and fluffy (??!?!?!) state. Looking forward to more updates.

Such a great chapter, can’t wait for more

This story was very suspenseful, with my mentally attempting at literally pushing and forcing Liz / Addison to resolve their issues.

I so much desire for them to either return to their original level of friendship or become a couple. Their being "apart for a lifetime" just does not seem appropriate for this story. Our author left us all hanging again, and breathlessly awaiting Ch. 05.

Definitely A 5*-STAR Rating!!!!

Spokes, you have been hearing this a lot lately and of course you know, but still I have to repeat that you're an outstanding storyteller.

Like all stories in your profile, this is an exceptional romance. Please don't keep us hanging for long. Can't wait to read Liz and Addie's confess love to each other.

Stay safe and keep writing!

I always know there's going to be great visuals animating a story that challenges my mind, warms my heart, and touches my soul, whenever I see the name BrokenSpokes .

You and your team have done it again. Bravo

I’ve been checking daily for this chapter, and was delighted to see your update out this morning. I will do the same until the next one comes out. Your characters are so, so real. My stomach is is knots for both of them! I can’t wait to read the rest of their story.

I may have said this before but there are stories that once you start reading them you are always shocked and disappointed when the chapter ends and you can't start the next chapter. You are exceptional as a writer, always leaving the audience wanting the story to continue. So much of the time we wade through other stories wanting to feel that captivated feeling again, only to be disappointed when they fail. There is a lot truth in the saying "....you have to dig through a lot of dirt to find a true gem." I hope that the next chapter is at least 20 pages long.

And now I'll be anxiously awaiting chapter 5. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Wow can't wait to see what going next for these two.

Hi, your stories are amazing. Is there any way I can donate and support you? Your stories are too good to be free.

I have read all of your stories and check regularly for new ones. Wonderful writing.

So very well written; love your stories. As they capture tension/love among characters. Page turner, so we now await next episode.

So freaking good. I hope you are well on your way to having the next chapter done.

I love this story and I love your writing.

Thank you.

Your writing is so good that if you wrote all of these stories PG 13 I don't think most of your readers would mind. You have painted a universe that many of us would like to live in. I can't think of a better complement. I appreciate you sharing your talent but honestly you should consider your next story be a novel. You have talent!

Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter! We need closure! Addison and Liz need closure!

As expected. Incredible Story in an even more incredible world.

Story and Writing 10/5.

Bonus Points for worldbuilding

Spokes,reading your work feels like watching it unfold. Its so real. Every tine i see a new post by you,i feel so happy. With everything happening in the world and all the pain,you provide so much happiness.

We all appreciate your time and hard work.

Thank you for making us so happy through your creativity.

I am looking forward to hearing so much more from you.

My request is,please don't make us wait too long.

I hope you are safe. Have a great day and keep writing.

Another brilliant instalment in this story and whilst you left us wanting more I’m happier how this episode ended with the hope these two will finally get together but I can’t wait to see how it turns out!

I love how you’ve interwoven this with your other stories especially Kat and Megan’s tale and also the way you really make me feel the emotions Liz and Addie are going through.

I know it will probably be a couple of weeks before the next episode so I’ve prepared myself for that but please don’t keep us waiting too long.

Thank you

I'm very happy that Addie and Liz are at least on semi speaking terms again. Very well done. Good story, real characters, real emotions. Your stories are like watching a movie with the imagery that you present to the reader.

It's always a joy to read your work. You have a gift for writing.

As always, thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Its geting better and better

What I am especially enjoying about this series, which now blends Jo's and Blue's story, Kat's and Meg's story, and Liz and Addy, is the interconnectedness' of all of their stories. I can rock along with focusing on Liz and Addy, but also get some updates on the other characters I have grown to admire and care about. That is so special. And then, of course, I am leaking from my eyes as Liz, in the end, struggles to fight her way to the top of Addy's stairs, and pulls herself down the hallway to Addy's door...and we know as she is doing that, her heart is opening up to a true fact of her life.....straight or not.....she is in love with Addy......and then, when Liz forces Addy finally into the kiss....THE kiss....my heart and eyes are gushing, and I am literally bawling. I love your stories Spokes. Thanks so much for honoring us with your amazing talent..

I have enjoyed reading from the first series with kat and megs then on to jo and jill.. i am looking forward to more if this one.. so glad viv is out as i didnt like her at all.. looking forward to other stories you will write

Wonderful story, you’re a great storyteller. Loved “Hard Landing” so I was hoping this would be as good-you didn’t disappoint. Look forward to the next chapter(s)!!

I love the stair scene. Those moments when your heart dictates what your body is capable of are so engaging. I’m more desperate for your chapter 5 than I am when for coffee when my kids wake me up before the sun. That is a feat. Love your work and your mind Spokes.

Wow! Liz just keeps surprising me and superseding herself. Crawling up the stairs like that? That's way more effort than most of us are willing to put into a relationship... And she did it for FRIENDSHIP.

Once again you did an excellent job writing this and I did an excellent job making sure I didn't do anything else until I was done reading it. Thank you❤

I don't know how you snuck this one past me as I check every day to see if you've written some more. It isn't just a sex story but literature. You are a very gifted writer and should be trying to get something published. Can't wait for #5.

I'm waiting for the next chapter! I can't deal not knowing what's happening! 😂.

I enjoy the way you portray your characters. They seem real! Thank you

I am pretty sure you must have heard this before but, YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER HANDS DOWN! I don't even feel persuaded to read other stories you've brought life to. It's just simple, if you want to know the incredible couple Jo and Blue, read Hand Landing. Want an insight into Kat and Megan, read 'Twas The Night Before and of course Wheels In Motion for Liz and Addison. It all comes together as ONE, just Brilliant!

For the record, Liz is quite a gem no? Going through so much stress just to talk to a gay woman while she's 'straight' lol. Go get your woman girl!!!!

Also always so happy to hear from Jo and Blue! And of course now. Eric. 😍

I love all your big-as-life characters, BS, but this chapter really drove one thing home: I love Liz so much. Her no-shit attitude is refreshing against Addie's refusal to communicate like an adult. Thank you for sharing these lovely stories with us.

And it ends on a zing. I love the traces of humour including

"As I turned to go, Jimmy asked "What's nunya?"

"Nunya bidness!" Kat and Angel said in unison. They laughed as I wheeled past Agent Amber and said, "Well c'mon, let's roll.""

But in all seriousness another beautifully written chapter ranging across the emotions. Thank goodness Liz has put on her army hat and become a hard ass otherwise Addie might well be in trouble. Too late, she already is. And now onto chapter 5.

I just read this again, for like the seventh time. Love.

Thats truly intense as Liz is a fighter for her heart ..... Yes turning around walking away shutting someone out of your life being afraid of whatever, thats o society move, ok not a 100% but yeah a well known one ...... You are so talented , love this story int totally

Tears.

As a person with a disability, the only thing that takes me out of the story is the term handicapped. It is woefully dated. an ADA ramp or ADA Button, is better. Emphasize the person over the disability. That said, your stories are brilliant. Thank you.

Eisenhower originally called it the "Military Industrial complex," and he was afraid of it. As he should have been. See what it got us into in Vietnam, and Afghanistan.

Amazing story,I’m loving this, beautiful writing again

The final scene in this chapter is one of my favourites in your stories

So, I actually went back and re-read 'Twas the Night Before Xmas. Another of your marvelous stories! Your characters are so believable and down to earth. Love how you are intertwining this story with Hard Landing (a bit) and your other gems. No wonder your stories are getting all the accolades! Looking forward to the last chapter, though I am in pretty sure of how it will end... tears at my end, I'm sure!