All Comments on 'When a Friend Came to Visit'

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fanfarefanfareover 8 years ago
Impressive doggerel

e1, a really fun satire of the "Great Man' archetype. Old and cranky is the way to go...never pass up the opportunity to piss on your enemies graves.

erectus123erectus12312 months agoAuthor

Very funny! (if I must say) The story roasts a Literotica critic we knew little about. I believe he claimed to be a college professor who had critical comments about any poem we (our group) wrote. He wasn't too pleased with the satire and stopped taking part afterward. We missed his acerbic comments. and still do.

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