All Comments on 'The Azra-El Series Ch. 18.1'

Well I just saw that the new chapter is up, but I don’t have enough time to read it all in one go unfortunately, so I have to wait but I’m excited to read it

My friend you have ruined my week! How can I go on while waiting for part 2???? I loved this chapter. I am curious as to what will happen next. Mainly the flyball tournemount. I'm not a baseball fan but I love your flyball matches. I have a hung as to who the spy is but I won't post here. Just in case I'm right. Please please keep writing. As you are one of 4 long running authors I follow and I'm excited for the finally and the next arc. As always I remain a fan (feel free to smile again)

Keep up the good work

Patrick

Thank you so much for your stories. I hope to be reading them for months and years to come.

Adored the glimpse into a possible future, Fatherhood is a thing of true beauty. Wish I were one, and a good one at that.

Was that dream of him as an adult a future vision ? if so are what was the feeling he had in his legs does that mean he can use the world energy to make fin like that mermaid that would be interesting

Story over gratuitous sex scenes. There's already plenty of "bow-chika-wow-wow-who-ordered-a-pizza" level of stories out there. Sex scenes are better when they fit. This story is actually really good! Please keep at it.

Thank you for your effort in writing this story. Made me camp and refresh daily for new chapter.

Every now and then, a writer appears on this site with a tale of their own, one that entraps the reader, teases their imagination with the world that has been created in the mind of another. A fantasy land that we as mere observers of the document could not have come up on our own, but now it extends to feed the mind of the places and people contained within.

We find ourselves hungry for more, searching for the thrill of a new chapter or the disappointment of the lack thereof. There is one person who can fill the void, the creator of this magic, and we wait, with anticipation akin to the old days, where we gathered around the fire to hear from the storyteller.

Magic, one person can create so much, and for that, I thank you.

It was hellova coincidence that Blaze utilized what that professor showed him. I think it was staged. It was pretty much invented just to be used here. (Hero suddenly gained power up after being defeated to rise once more and kill the demon in front of him, thanks to this gem he bought 2 hours ago in a town.) You catch my drift here.

More importantly, what could be the secret behind Lynn? Demon sounds like too much to be true, but I can't exclude some sort of manipulation of his mind. She is springing him and us grandly. Do you know what would be a jab against BLaze jaw? If she was a reincarnated guy just like him... :P

(Anyway, end of trolling, I wouldn't actually want that.)

I'm enjoying the world energy is showing blaze a glimpse of the future. His baby girl has silver hair and then he finds that Lynn has silver hair and wings. Will Elyssa meet Lynn?????

As a reader engaged this much, I couldn't help but wonder: how Blaze was ever transported into Azra-El? Is there a demonic conspiracy or sort of a ritual behind this, especially he's an Unnatural - a male angel? What was he doing on Earth before (did he had some accident before he found himself in a different world)? Is it also possible for him to be sent back to Earth (much like John Carter of Mars?

On the dad scene, I guess Blaze already achieved the deity level (at a hundred years of age!!!) If that's the case, it's pretty weird to see some feet with wings haha but I have no problem with that. I can't help but imagine when he becomes a Deva a new set of wings ... on his butt lol. :) or more freakish, on his neck (idk but maybe it's just me).

I don't have to rush for answers or expect to answer all of them. I believe a good story makes you engage (and immerse) at it and not merely reading it. Like the central plot is seen with clarity while dropping some mysterious details that may affect the flow of the story. It makes you ask questions as you go along the way and maybe answers them in when you wouldn't expect them or when answers have big implications on the current situation of the characters (and some may spawn a new set of questions)... you know, an element of anticipation and mystery (and humor). I think that keeps readers engaged. Or it's just we share the same taste.

Btw, I'm not a fictional story writer, but sort of an essayist. Maybe Blaze can use my help haha :)

So uh I just got around to reading the last chapter and this one I would have sooner but my life has been in a spiral for a couple months now, blaze was exactly what I needed to lift my spirits this chapter was probably the most suspenseful yet satisfying I've read yet the scene in the last chapter with pricilla(?) Was really cool I hope it can happen out of dream🤤 but that dad dream had me like WOW I have a couple people that I want to be the mother then again it would be even better if he had a kid with each😎 but onto sky I really like his personality and the way he understands just like badava also I might be crazy but I seems like blaze needs to find a cave near the cottage that Jeffrey just happens to show up in one day it would be really cool if blaze had a arsenal of dangerous exotic animals and the fact blaze had only grown half a centimeter threw me off but thinking about it it makes a lot of sense with how long angels live I also have to keep reminding myself that blaze isn't but what a year old because I keep thinking that he's like some ripped bodybuilder. I am curious about the tattoo paint though is it permanent, semi or temporary. The Viking type building is gotten my attention on lockdown and makes me wonder what kind of house blaze would buy as an adult would it be modest, would it be lavish, flashy or unassuming. A thought about the stiff feather thought is I think he should have kids like humans but it should only be possible when there is the true love of one or multiple. What about the ghost is there some sort of spirit world or is there someone amount our midst who isn't who they say they are. About the wings if there is a way to make wings appear pure is there a way to lose malice or what not and become untainted. Jie er was talking about swift wing style so I have to ask is it possible to learn more than one technique. I know my thoughts are scattered but I had a lot on my mind after two chapters I also know my thoughts and questions will be answered if I keep reading but I had to get them out... And as always thank you for writing

Nicely done my number one most favourite drake!

So now Blaze has Clairvoyance EX huh? Can he see the past, future and things in the present? If so, they I can see him exploiting this ability in combat. Even it's limited somehow. It would be funny if has to have a "good time" first to use it. Maybe even a mere "kiss" before combat? Like using it mid combat to anticipate when and how his opponent(s) will attack.

I liked your versions of the songs. Especially because it made me have that "light bulb" moment where one thinks "What the Hela?! I just figured out that reference!" type of moment. Now all that's missing is the "Hit me baby one more time" moment! Probably something grand; involving the Kindred thing Lynn and Blaze have going on.

But here's hoping we see more of Priscilla. I hope there's some development in her "frenemy" relationship with. It be exceptionally interesting if she figures out Blazey's "lol" secret (not that I am implying "it's" little or anything hehe).

But wow! The imagery just keep getting better. And tell your editors they're doing a Golden job. Especially that really perverted one. You know who you are! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Also, out respect of your request, I won't mention which of the mysteries I've just figured out for the sake of the "smut" and "plot" and all jazz. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

But Hela dammnit! I wanna reveal "ALL" the secrets haha. I don't how long I can keep quite about it all lol. It's like being told an extra juicy secret and being told NOT to reveal... Ah well.

Other than that spiel, I feel like the plot is getting somewhere interesting. Dare I say that we may actually see Blaze putal all his training and new gear to the test by fighting real enemies that wanna kill him for once soon? Because it certainly feels like it. Now it's got me thinking which characters will live and die...

Ah, Hela. I'll just eat popcorn with Momo and Jeffery as we watch this tale unfold and the plot thickens! (Yes, I rehired Momo. It cost me and arm and a leg... And "more"...)

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I never liked the Lynn character or that whole story arch to be honest. Personally it would of been more fun to see a romantic frenemy relationship develop between Blaze and Priscilla. Though obviously Lynn is that storyline but magnified. I think the fact I don't like her character is more about her obvious maturity, diffidence to Blaze. Having one person react so strongly yet the other is totally unaffected just makes the whole zing thing superfluous and really nothing but a distraction?

I don't know how many of you got it. Also i want to know how you - the author has so much knowledge about ashoka and his edicts. "Priyadasi" was a good wink. I mean you even modified his messages to suit this world.