All Comments on 'When Darkness Falls Pt. 1 Ch. 03'

Dear God, you cast an erotic haze over this part of the story that was irresistable. It's so hot, but not tawdry. I loved it. You have a way with words sometimes that's unbelievable. I am so hoping that Dorian being a vampire, he won't harm Jordan. I just adore Jordan and I want him to be OK. Thank you so much for continuing and I'm looking forward to more.

Two thumbs way up, three if I had an extra hand:-). Loved the character developement. Wonderful job, keep it up!

Got a little confused in ch. 2, but this WAY made up for it! ;) However, you switched the dj to a gothic band, just sayin'.

I actually enjoy this story sooo much