All Comments on 'When Darkness Falls Pt. 2 Ch. 09'

Keep up the good work - very entertaining and well written.

Thank you

J

Throughly enjoyed it. Very hot. I'd love to see more of these guys or other stories of people linked to them. If you were to take the story a little slower and allowed us to really get to know the characters that would be even better but as it is, I'm not complaining, it's a great story. Keep up the good work.

Absolutely adore this series. I especially love the twins. They are hot!!! You're writing is brilliant and the attention to detail especially when it comes to the sex makes these stories so very delicious. Keep writing. Your stories are gorgeous!

This is undoubtedly the Very Best story i have read on Literotica!!

How can you have possibly stopped writing?

You have a great gift for the written word, so keep writing!!!!

The end seemed the slightest bit rushed with an abrupt stop! D:}