All Comments on 'When Fantasy Becomes Reality'

A promising start to what I hope is far more! Great stuff!

So..Having Fun?

This story doesn't contain any incest and should probably be moved to a more appropriate category.

Not bad for a first story but this is not incest/taboo in any way. This should be in a different category.

Where is the incest? They aren't even step's which isn't incest either.

I'm pretty sure I original put it in "First time" but I guess a mod changed it when it was reviewed

I'm disappointed

Great for a first story.

I really enjoyed your story. But more than two years have passed and you haven't shared anything new with us. That's a crying shame. 4/5