All Comments on 'When His Sister Cums... It's Messy'

Lots-lots of missing words. So many that it made reading difficult at times.

I thought this was a very good story but it got a little messy (no pun intended) at the end.

I thought Shannon wanted to marry him, and all that, and I get why he didn't want to marry her after finding out about everything, but what happened to Shannon and Jason's relationship in all this? What all was her role after they all moved to Colorado? What happened to how they all felt about each other?

He is cross with everyone but won't talk to them. Fucks his mates girl so his mate will know she is a cheating slut, but doesn't tell his mate. Then he sleeps with and fucks Shannon, but is mad at her and isn't talking to her. Then goes to the other girl who is a lesbian, but not really. Still not talking but fucks. After lying to the girl he said manipulated him even though she might or might not be pregnant, along with the lesbians who were a part of the manipulation, but one wasn't sort of part of it, but was. And now he has g one to her at a hotel even though he is not talking to anyone.

Can't keep reading, had to stop. My brain is imploding over this slop opera.

It’s Messy is certainly an accurate title. I have zero idea where this plot went and why.

I like happy endings. If only life worked out as smoothly as this.

I got halfway through the first page and got so confused i gave up, sorry but messy is about right.

it was a very messy ending and i loved reading every minute of it. its not often we get to tie all the loose ends up but you did a great job! keep up the writing!

This one started out with a real life situation and although chapter 2 was not bad, I struggled with chapter 3, and it shows.

I am currently working on chapter 4 of "Scott's Home-Cumming" and I want to leave you all happier with that than I did with this series.

Thank you all for your continued support and comments.

Brad

So 3 years on and still no part 4.

Are not bothering to finish this ?

If not why not ?

Authors just don't seem to care about leaving their readers high and dry any more..............

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