All Comments on 'When I Found You Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wonderful love story

With good character development, and an excellent plot, balanced with tender if rather too-brief love scenes, this story really needs to be continued as the author has indeed promised with the words "more to come". Hopefully, this will soon be the case.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good story...

...until the marriage proposal & discussion of casual sex with others in college. A proposal after only knowing each other a few days is way too soon. I don’t think most couples have conversations during sex. Having casual sex partners just ruin the romance for me.

ranec1ranec1about 4 years ago
Mean As!!

chur m8 awsum story

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I am an older man married over 50 years. I love writing stories and I hope to contribute more as time goes on.

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