All Comments on 'When I Found You'

Nice story. Thank you very much.

It's a sad day on Lit when crap like this gets a high rating.

Spelling, grammar, old over used story line, poor writing,........... need one go further?

Please spare us all, don't write part two.

This was a great story and was written with far better grammer than in most stories on this site. Most writers seem not to know the correct useage of lay, laying and laid - you got that right too.

Really looking forward to your next posting

It was a nice enough story, but it seemed almost as though it had either been written in a foreign language and translated without any allowance for normal speech patterns, or was written by someone for whom English is not their first language. The grammar and spelling could certainly have used an editor (or, at least, a proof-reader) .