by zenobia
mmm sweetie i cannot tell you how lovely this was to read..thankyou so much for sharing with us....
raphy
zennie, Thank you for sharing such a beautiful memory. Sue.
Thanks zenobia for sharing your experience with us it was a very good read. Wolfie_67
zen, wow, that was great, thank you for sharing that with the rest of us. keep on writing, and sharing!
hugssssssssss
zen, this is beautiful, so simply told, so perfectly expressed, i love it, sarcy
Wonderfully written sweetheart...thankyou for sharing it with us. I shall have to go back and read it again.
Much love
Rc
Wonderfully written sweetheart...thankyou for sharing it with us. I shall have to go back and read it again.
Much love
Rc
Can hardly speak after reading this. :) Really wonderful, zeno. i loved it! Thank you for sharing!
thank you so much for sharing this zenobia. It is truly exquisite and erotic. These are the moments W/we all search for and to be able to express that to others is uplifting and generous. Be well. TQ
What a beautifully described encounter! Everything flowed so nicely, and I really thought you did a great job describing how you were feeling. I think I liked the sweetness of the ending the best of all, but the part about him winking was rather nicely done too. *hugs you tightly* Thank you for sharing!
-cryptic
zen - well written and straight from the heart. couldn't ask for more. Thank you for sharing. - JK
Zen that was wonderful! you are a talented writer and i hope to read more of your work!!!
you did not surprise me..i knew you were HOT..this just puts it into words.
love ya girlie..
velly
described -- all of it. please keep writing; this is wonderful. sg
thank you zennie, for a wonderful story. your Master told the room today it was His favorite and i can certainly see why. hugggsssss
wenchie
I didn't know you did this. I love it. Thank you for mentioning your link in your Chat profile.
You are a very good writer. Hope you do more.
I read a lot of stories, and never leave comments, but this one warranted a comment. I was completely swept away, righ there with you. It reminded Me of the things that brought Me into this Lifestyle to begin with. A real masterpiece
Absolutely beautiful. Literally brought tears to my eyes. Incredibly intense. ~FMG